Your combination of fonts is visually appealing & expressive. I especially love your first spread; you've pulled together very different fonts in a complementary way.
There is some really lovely type combinations here. It could really not work, but you've brought it together in a great way. I'd like to see more of the display faces toward the end of the piece.
I love the movement you have to the text! I agree with Craig that I need more contrast at the end. I can't wait to be able to read the text on the printed version to better feel your visual expression according to the meaning of the text.
I love the layout of the first one. I can see the display typeface and pull quote as I first seen. May be you can play with body copy a bit that can make them more unity. If it possible, you can add more body copy. It seems to me there is no power of body copy. I also love body copy of the second one. It’ll be better if you can combine both of these together.
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Your combination of fonts is visually appealing & expressive. I especially love your first spread; you've pulled together very different fonts in a complementary way.
There is some really lovely type combinations here. It could really not work, but you've brought it together in a great way. I'd like to see more of the display faces toward the end of the piece.
I love the movement you have to the text! I agree with Craig that I need more contrast at the end.
I can't wait to be able to read the text on the printed version to better feel your visual expression according to the meaning of the text.
I love the layout of the first one. I can see the display typeface and pull quote as I first seen. May be you can play with body copy a bit that can make them more unity. If it possible, you can add more body copy. It seems to me there is no power of body copy. I also love body copy of the second one. It’ll be better if you can combine both of these together.
I like the way you handled the flow of the poem; the movement is really lovely!
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